Gifts for the new King

The new King, Tymorth, son of Daumere, sat on his throne as the first door was being put into place. Surrounding him were the gifts from the farm collectives that would feed not only his own kingdom, but had become the vital part of trade and the wider economy of the continent. They were all a reminder, that all Kings would never be able to have such impact as their greatest leader. It was this idea that had sent previous kings searching for a quest to rival it, only ending in their warriors to return, defeated, with their King on his shield to be buried in the Tomb of their kin.

The rough face of the young leader perused the hoard, each a reminder of the connections with the Kingdom that he would have to carefully manage, but also to the links outside the natural barrier that kept them safe from the farthest of enemies that might threaten mankind. There was the usual collection of gold, weapons, treasures from the past that to the right holder would have them giggling with glee to hold such vestiges of history in their hands. The axe that slay the last goblin Grute that entered the natural barrier, heralding such honour that it was the mightiest of Goblins to have marched through the kingdoms of man all those years ago. But to the casual passer-by, it was a half rotten handle that had barely kept its shape along with a heavily oiled axe head to attempt to keep it from ruin. The box it travelled in had been rebuilt countless times, one day it will only be a piece of metal, that if the label got lost, could easily have been tossed away.

What caught the young King’s eye first, was the comb, hand delivered by the Dwarves that live just outside his Kingdom. As jovial relations are with them, the threat they could pose was always in mind. All villages knew the horror that a dwarven attack could bring, every family had tales of what they had witnessed, who they had lost. The Border Wars was not just a story, it kept the warriors well trained knowing a friend can easily become an enemy, and a line in the ground does not mean the same to another as it might to you.

There were a collection of tokens, but the dwarf, who had been dressed in ceremonial clothing and armour, at least for that was what his advisor had told him they were dressed in. The rumours of the Dwarf skill at metal work and fine jewels appeared to be fairy tales from what he saw in their clothing. But those of the Hammer and those of the Smith were different to the Border Dwarfs. To their kin they were seen as wild, untamed and ones to be avoided. The emissary from the Dwarfs of the Hammer had delayed their trip for 3 days, to simply make sure there would be no time for them to meet, or even be in the same land as each other if possible.

His accent was strange, but one that was understandable to the young King. ‘Greetings young King,’ Was this an attempt at insult for meeting a freshly crowned head? ‘You have a strong line behind you and your ancestors will be proud. The runes speak of a strong arm for an axe, or a sword if you prefer. A steady shield we see in your future, one that protects not just you, but those behind you.’

It wasn’t until his uncle made a sign to do something that the young Kind realised that they were all waiting for him to respond. ‘My thanks to you, emissary of the Dwarfs.’

‘I am not an emissary of the Dwarf. I come from my own kin and we are here to welcome you to your new seat. I see that you will have to add some elements of the world to your learning in between your weapon, and farming, lessons.’

The mottled grey of chainmail and the wolf skins on top might look more for show than those standing behind the Dwarven figure, but the shining axe by his side and shield held on his back made it clear that he could use them if required. The young King looked at the dwarf,  now testing the water with the him, the warnings of how he should be with them, and not to anger them was clear, but if his uncle was to be in charge, he would be doomed to be a King in name only.

‘I can see that we both need lessons, one of my understanding of the dwarven kin and kingdoms, and for you,’ a moments pause to collect a breath, it was only a moment but the stories of the young boy in front of a dwarf in the wars and the rapid changes that can happen in a blink of an eye, a slice of an axe, a moment can appear to feel a long time when there is suddenly one in front of you not attempting to hide slight insults to you. ‘For you, I feel we need to explore more how we shall talk to each other. We do not call our leaders young or make fun of them in front of others. It can be seen as rude and challenging.’

It had slipped out. His uncle visibly froze to hold his hand back, the phrase had almost been written on every wall in each village, never challenge a dwarf. The young King held his gaze and waited for what would be coming. In the middle of the throne room stood the dwarf chosen to represent the dwarfs who were called wild by their own kin, with 6 ceremonial guards to follow. Each with gilded weapons but the steel was there to fight if needed.

‘I knew you would be a good choice for this Kingdom!’ The laughter echoed around the room with a sigh from the guards at the door who heard every word. ‘I told our chief that you were a good one, your father always spoke of you kindly, but said you had a stubborn streak that was not to be tested.’

With the abrupt laughter, came an about turn, and they left.

No one spoke until the King’s uncle came to speak but the first words were the Kings. ‘Before you try to lecture me on how to talk and greet these dwarves into my kingdom remember, I am the King that makes the call to the villages to put down their seeds, and pick up their swords. I am the one who sits and sees the first shield come in from the war. I am the one who needs to not flinch when an axe holder is there in front of me. Leave my side now uncle. I will call for you after the moon has gone.’

Slowly the room filtered out, the entourage of his uncle followed, allowing the King’s own guards replace themselves elsewhere to guard down the corridor, leaving the new King and his personal aid to review the gifts they had been given and the great catalogue could begin for the start of his reign.

‘You didn’t need to be so hard on your uncle there Tymorth.’

‘What would you have me do? Let him order me around in front of everyone?’ His eye were drawn to the Goblin Axe, the history of the great deeds always were a reminder to a new king. The long corridor for all visitors past the archways. A reminder to the new bearer of the throne that there could be a door added to each to show their great deeds. Or, as the axe whispered to all that held it in their possession, their actions can leave behind stories when they themselves have passed to be collected by one of the family.

‘So what did the dwarves bring?’ Ja’Mar was always interested in symbolism, the idea of a gift being given had to have a meaning. He always wanted to find something that had a meaning to the person he was giving as opposed to the large golden jewel encrusted pieces that people might choose to give. The small objects often had pride of place, jewels were to be hidden away if possible.

The idea of these dwarves giving a gift to a new king was rare, his father was given a chest of items, an axe made by their blacksmiths, but it was designed for a strong warrior meaning his father could never weald it. His childhood disease stopped him from being able to use both arms properly. To those that live by what they produce, it was a mark of dishonour that took many years to repair as they had made the gift, finely balanced to excellent detail, but the choice of metal meant it was wrong.

When Tymorth was born, they attempted to bring a small gift, a toy that their young would play with, to make them grow up to be strong warriors. Not many knew, but he still had it in his most prized possessions, but never dared ask anyone how he was meant to play with it. It would be ignorant to ask his father as he should know, and to ask anyone else would reflect on his father failing to teach him.

‘So here we have the most unknown community around, giving you a light axe, I guess they didn’t want to repeat the last time.’ His eyes spoke with fondness of the past King, a beloved leader to his people and a personal mentor to Ja’Mar. ‘Interesting, they have given a comb, I guess this is to welcome you to manhood when you decide to grow a beard of quality. Dwarves like a good beard, tells a story by how you plate and decorate it.’

He passed the comb over to Tymorth. The weight was light but strong to sort out what must be messy beards for them. They always seemed to glisten in the light from the torch light. The oils they used must resilient to heat or that would cause a problem in itself.

‘What else have they given me then?’

Ja’Mar had already laid out the items to review and record. Writing was a skill not all got to learn, but one that he liked to use whenever it was possible to. ‘Let me see. We have the comb, the axe, a series of 5 golden coins with some markings on each. A map of our border with them on hide. I guess this is a reminder that they honour the treaty. Looks to be the same. Might be worth having someone check it for fine details.’

Tymorth was listening but the way comb was shaped. It fit into his hand as if it was made for him. There were numerous finger points for when it motioned the combing of a future beard, if he were to grow one. “Say what you will about the Border Dwarven Kingdom, but they mighth produce the best beard combs in the Kingdom.”

“You know they use the bones from their enemies to show how they have conquered them, meaning our grandparents from the Border Wars?”

“Well that ruined that gift from the King.”

Carefully, the comb was placed down next to him as he pushed it over the Ja’Mar to add to the pile for sorting and storing. Each gift would have to be responded to properly to make sure no slight was given to those who have joined in the celebration of a new King.

The returning of a bone from someone who was killed in combat, the Dwarfs had been said to have different traditions, this was one that might need to be explored further.

My daily exercise to practice editing

So I have a daily thing I do, it brings me joy, normally, and it doesn’t often take me very long to do it. I wake up each morning ready and willing. So I turn over look for the email without fail. I open it and straight away my brain is woken up considering ideas. I have found I either come up with something quite quickly, or it seems to take until the end of the day for it to form. There are many different examples out there, but I simply follow the daily inspiration from @vss365official on twitter along with getting the email.

As I said, there are different feeds on twitter, and elsewhere, but I have started with this one, and I feel anymore will just take me down a path where I won’t get out of and be lost in a thick forest not sure where I started from with every 7th word a hashtag. Which will probably stop being fun and more of a brain teaser but on an epic, and futile, proportion. But why do I enjoy it?

Well, the first reason is that it is a great way to be creative. Not being in one story that seems to be twirling around in my head and on the digital page when I get time to write. I have realised I have started to create a character called Todd. There have been other names I have used, but Todd just seems to have been the one that I seem to stick too. There was the voice called Steve once, but he doesn’t seem to come along very often. There is no consistency, yet, for the character. I can see I will try and stretch myself to create something for a future character, probably called Todd, using the daily word to develop a story. As of yet, not done so.

The second reason is, when you have gone through the enjoyment, or anguish, of trying to create your story with the limited letters available on the platform of twitter, the enjoyment from reading what others have created enters a whole new level.

The third reason, and this is why I highly recommend it for anyone who is writing at any level, it has been amazing for editing. If I were still teaching I would be sharing this with my class each morning to have them send in their short pieces by the end of the day for a daily prize. Having a clear defined character limit on what you can write, with a dialogue, poem or other forms in mind, requires you to cut that little darlings, to consider each space that you are using. Quotation marks are great, but for each line that’s 2 spaces, are they really needed today? Do you need to write ‘Todd said’? I have altered so many phrases, lines and each word that I have put in, so when I look through what I wrote months ago, compared to now, I can see how I have changed what I write the more I do it. When I am editing my own pieces of work, there is often no real limit on what I write, but I am editing them not only better, but quicker. The more your practice, there better you will hopefully become.

I am in no way trying to even suggest I am the best out there, I just enjoy the fun. I am always amazed when someone comes across one of mine, likes it, comments or even retweets it. There seem to be many people out there who go through them more than me and explores what have been made, their selections are fun to scroll through if you are busy. Having a different host for half a month also allows there to be more variety of words which then, gives me, and you, more variety in what we can come up with.

When you start looking through the word of the day, following the hashtag that has kicked off as more people join in, there are those that create amazing poetry, visualise what the word could mean through emotion, some who can just seemingly create jokes or puns with what appear to be no effort at all (mainly because they do it each day without fail).

So if you are new to writing, or just want something a bit more than wordle to get your brain going on the journey in the morning/afternoon. Find @vss365official on twitter and explore what people have made. There are other examples out there for daily inspiration. As a creature of habit, I have found this one, but my main enjoyment is as I have said, reading through what others have made, practicing my own ideas out, and then being able to practice, daily, my own editing skills of making sure everyone letter counts.

But as always, whatever your inspiration, right now my dog sitting in the grass that we have let grow a bit longer in a our little garden, he is rolling around in the sun with a very general carefree life, or maybe you are seeing a person sitting in a café drinking coffee that is a bit too hot. Perhaps the wonder of a goblin behind a tree waiting to see you walk past so they can get on with escaping from somewhere. Either way, Just Write. Then see what you have written and the editing can begin.

The Wolf Moon

So this is part of a larger project about the moon. Not sure if I will get all (currently planning 14!) stories completed. But this is a first draft of the first one.

Hope you enjoy 🙂

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The crisp crackle of snow underfoot, the soft breeze through leaves that refused to fall during the dark months, each whisper from the branches tells the wanderer one thing. He is lost. Slowly the furs around him are pulled tighter, he has led the hunt for many years, he has yet to fail to bring back food for those waiting for it. There has always been something exploring the snow.

It is said a good hunter can smell the scent of blood in the air, to become part of the surroundings aides the hunter feel where nature has moved. The old stories told over camp fires to the young make the stoic hunters sound mythical, but once you are out there, your mind focuses on the cold, the trees, the trail. Searching for something to help you bring back another meal. You will, eventually, realise the truth.

In the snow, the hunter sees the faint traces of a track. The snows falls steadily so this can’t be old. All his senses tell him he is close. Slowly the bow is loaded, slowly he moves, slowly to try dampen down each crackle of the snow so nothing can hear him. The more he moves, the deeper the tracks become. It is not long until he finds what has making the trail. Low. Just as he was taught many cycles ago by his father. The bow is pulled.

Release.

The arrow flies through the air and finds its target. It wasn’t where he aimed for, but sometimes you get lucky when you miss and hit something better. The trail is now the red line as the animal tries to flee. Even at his age, the hunter can keep up, the chase is all important, not keeping quiet. The snow breaks as each foot pounds the soft powder and quickly goes from ankle deep to near his knee. In a clearing the animal lies, its final breath hangs in the air as it goes from its warm lungs to the cold surround it.

The hunter lays his hand on the beast, a life should never slip away without a thought. Especially if it is given up for others to continue their own.

A small knife is brought out from inside the layers of warmth, the edge caught in the moon light. The first cut on the rope to prepare the beast to transport focuses the hunter. The stories of battle, hunt and crafts come from his youth to now in every nook still visible on the blade.

With his focus on cutting and preparing the beast to help it be carried home by the group when they arrive, it is not until a shadow appears with the crackle of snow heard in front of him, not behind like he would expect.

He looks up and instantly sees what he had forgotten to be weary of. Age can hone the skills, but can also let them slip away. The wolf is grey with scars on his side. Like his own its face has seen many winters, and what was once two glowing yellow eyes, is now one dulled with age. But the teeth are still ready to eat the next meal.

Slowly the hunter reaches for his bow which is just out of reach and needs to look away to get to it. Breaking eye contact means a charge, but the wolf looks like a charge will not be as quick as it once was. They look at each other, they both realise that they are not as quick as they were, a fight will mean they both will not see the winter through.

As the wind pushes past the hunter the wolf begins to crouch, a smile on his face tells he knows they have arrived. Crouching slowly from the tree line are 3 hunters, younger, speedier, eager. Without breaking eye contact the hunter raises his hand backwards. The 3 new arrivals pause. Looking for instruction for their next move. One wolf, 4 hunters, the odds were good.

Slowly, shadows appear from behind the wolf, the pack arrives. But stops shortly after they have been seen. The glimmer of a tail moves and the new arrivals, young and hungry, pause.

The hunters hand begins to move back to his side lays a hand next to the beast on the ground. By hunting rights the beast is theirs. But hunting rights are not what is in question, survival trumps the honour of ownership, the strongest claim.

Slowly he presses with his knife. Looking at the lead wolf in his one good eye. The flow of movement for his hands, a practiced piece of artwork he has shown the young many times over. The care needed to now slit parts of the beast to keep the meat fresh and ready to be eaten. To not spill that which would foul the rest.

The only sound that can be heard is the knife slicing through. Slowly, the beast is split, then tied. A hand motions for one to come forward, a wrapped finger motions for the hunter to move slowly.

The young hunter comes and does what the motions tell him. He picks up and begins to drag half of the beast back towards his fellow hunters. With the beginning of removal of the beast two wolves start to move. The first to react is the lead wolf. He growls. But not at the hunter, at his own. A tail flies in the air with snow kicked in each direction. But the eye stays locked.

Cautiously, the hunters collectively carry the half of the animal back behind the tree line. A whistle can be heard to motion to the old hunter they are clear and the crackling of snow tells him they are moving away. He rises, his form caught in the full moon. A scar on his own face, a hand wrapped up too tightly to have all the fingers. Slowly, backwards, a slight limp on one side from the passage of time on his frame. As the moon light fills the opening again and the hunter joins the tree line. The old wolf paws the ground, to begin sharing the meal with the pack that moves out of the trees.

The wolf pack will feast on the food to survive another day. As both aged hunters know, the truth for hunting in scarce times, it knowing when to hunt, when to lose, when to attack.